Ainur Bulasheva
I am a PhD student in the School of Agriculture, Policy, and Development at the University of Reading
Location UK
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to April Shwe Win
Well done! @AprilShweWin, I enjoyed reading your paragraph. You have a clear introduction and a paragraph leaders. Could you tell me what sentences will be your paragraph leaders?
As a suggestion, I would say "for a sense of freedom" just to give more clarity.
Also, I like the way you conclude your paragraph. Good job!
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to Rina Kawasaki
Exactly! Practice makes things better. Nevertheless, your paragraph was impressive!
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to Rina Kawasaki
Great work! @RinaKawasaki, your paragraph has a clear structure. I am happy to see you applying our strategies.
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to モエカ ナカ
@SilkeGerstung We are glad to see new students join us. I appreciate your desire to learn new knowledge. I hope you like this course. Welcome aboard!
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to Anny Rausseo
I think it is a great topic, and it is clear as well. If you want to discuss more than one reason, write in plural 'reasons'. If you want to make your topic shorter, here is one option: Discuss the reasons why Venezuelans favour e-books over physical books.
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You are welcome! @AnnyRausseo
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Well done! @Hayman
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Thank you for your feedback @Hayman
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to Hay man
These are great reasons to live in the city. Thank you @Hayman
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That is awesome!
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Good job! Nagasaki is a very famous city with significant historical importance.
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@samizaid Well done! You can compare your answers in the next step.
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to Hay man
Well done! @Hayman The way you introduced your topic and what you are going to discuss is a brilliant technique. Also, I like that every idea starts with a new paragraph with a clear leading sentence.
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to Christiana Oppong
Thank you, @ChristianaOppong. Good job! In your opinion, what sentence is your topic sentence?
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Thank you, @ChaduvulaSureshBabu. Try to be more specific in your ideas. You can mention ideas you have a greater knowledge of as you need to elaborate on them.
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to sami zaid
Thank you @samizaid Great explanation. But at this stage, it is better to state your ideas shortly in bullet points.
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to Alleena Sayyed
Great ideas! Thanks
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You are in the right direction!
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You can start his course with a small experience as well.
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That is great! You have good experience as writing assignments in English requires academic writing skills.
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I hope so too. Welcome to this course @AlleenaSayyed
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This course should be useful to you @CapitalGirl welcome to this course
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to Christiana Oppong
You did a fantastic job throughout the week! Well done! See you next week. @ChristianaOppong
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You are welcome! @SaadiaRamzanRamzan
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You are welcome @ChristianaOppong
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to shekiba sharifi
@shekibasharifi yes, that is a shame.
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to Anny Rausseo
That's wonderful! Thank you for sharing this @AnnyRausseo
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The word "provide" means to supply something that is needed. It can be used in various contexts, such as providing information, assistance, resources, or solutions. For example, "They will provide you with the necessary documents" .
I am not sure if you meant the same in your title. But ‘as long as’ sounds clearer.
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It is great to meet you here, @AlleenaSayyed. I hope you enjoy this course.
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to モエカ ナカ
Welcome to this course @モエカナカ . By the way, how we can pronounce your name in English?
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to shekiba sharifi
You did an amazing job! Well done! see you next week.
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Amazing! Thank you for providing a full essay. I enjoyed reading it. Lest see how this essay will change in the end of this course, when you will apply new knowledge and tips from the next weeks. What do you think?
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to shekiba sharifi
Well spotted! Thanks
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What country is it about?
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Good! You noticed many things.
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I see. We always need to practice and revise to learn new things.
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You are right. Glad you noticed that.
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to Rina Kawasaki
Thank you for your feedback.
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to Rina Kawasaki
Great insight! @RinaKawasaki See you next week.
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to Mustafa Muradi
What a nice feedback! I hope so too @MustafaMuradi
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You are welcome!
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Good point!
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to April Shwe Win
You did great this week ! @AprilShweWin See you next week
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Knowing your weaknesses is halfway to successful learning. This allows you to focus on the exact things. Later in this course, we will provide information that will be useful to you.
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Good points! Thank you.
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to shekiba sharifi
More ideas coming up! Thanks @shekibasharifi
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to shekiba sharifi
Thanks for sharing, @shekibasharifi. Hope the situation regarding women's education in your country will change.
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You have a good experience.
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to shekiba sharifi
Nice to meet you here, @shekibasharifi. Thanks for introducing yourself.
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Hi @shekibasharifi, It is never too late to start learning. Welcome to this course.
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Great! In the next step, you can check your answers @AprilShweWin
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to Anny Rausseo
Nice paragraph! It is great that you managed to discuss past and present situations in your country.
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to Hadeer Hefni
Thanks! Well done @HadeerHefni
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@SaadiaRamzanRamzan Great! Thank you for clarifying
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Hi @AhmedAli Welcome aboard!
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Great! Did you publish your articles?
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That is an interesting point. It is great when writing reflects someone's personality.
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to Alleena Sayyed
It definitely will. I am glad you joining us. Welcome to this course! @AlleenaSayyed
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to Fraidon Behtash
Hi @FraidonBehtash, Welcome to this course. Hope you find it useful.
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Great points!
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Hi @RinaKawasaki. Do not worry about your grammar for now. You can learn a lot of tips that can enhance your writing skills. Welcome to this course!
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to amin safarzadeh
Hi @aminsafarzadeh Welcome to this course!
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to amin safarzadeh
Sorry to hear that. But I can see you can clearly reflect on these changes.
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to amin safarzadeh
Thank you @aminsafarzadeh Good ideas
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to Saadia Ramzan Ramzan
Thanks for your feedback! @SaadiaRamzanRamzan Great progress.
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Good! The word "dessert" typically refers to a sweet course served at the end of a meal, while "desert" refers to a dry, barren area of land with little or no vegetation. I suppose you meant a second meaning here.
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Your paragraph leader is grammatically correct. However, it could be slightly refined for clarity: People love to live in Mandalay as long as they have access to a variety of food options. The rest of the sentences of the paragraph provide a clear explanation of that reason. Well done! @AprilShweWin
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to Anny Rausseo
Sounds like a dream @AnnyRausseo. What a wonderful place! Is this place good for tourism?
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I would like to read your essay as I like to do stretching. You might consider using "reasons" instead of "reason", as you are going to mention more than two reasons ;)
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Your paragraph provides a clear explanation of why people choose to live in Coro, and a paragraph leader clearly outlines this reason. Great job! @AnnyRausseo
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to Saadia Ramzan Ramzan
Great choice! @SaadiaRamzanRamzan. It would be better to write in the plural form "women" as long as you are not writing about a particular woman :)
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Glad it was useful!
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You are welcome! @ChristianaOppong I hope everything is clear.
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Was everything clear to you?
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You did a fantastic job on the task! @AprilShweWin Great examples.
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These are great examples with no grammar mistakes @AprilShweWin . Well done!
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Nice sentence! @ChristianaOppong
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You are welcome! @SaadiaRamzanRamzan
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Great! I made some minor corrections: Nearly everyone feels shy when they are a new student.
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You can just simply press on the word box and move it to the right place @ChristianaOppong
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you are welcome @ChristianaOppong
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you are welcome @SaadiaRamzanRamzan
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good examples @ChristianaOppong
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great job!
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You are welcome @ChristianaOppong
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You are welcome! @SaadiaRamzanRamzan. Glad to know it was useful.
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That is great!
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to Saadia Ramzan Ramzan
Welcome to week 3! @SaadiaRamzanRamzan
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to April Shwe Win
Great ideas! Well done @AprilShweWin
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to April Shwe Win
you are welcome @AprilShweWin
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Well done! You did great anyway, @SaadiaRamzanRamzan
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Good! @SaadiaRamzanRamzan What about the thesis statement?
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Thank you. Paragraph leaders should not start with the question. Instead, you can mention one of the reasons people move there. For example, you mentioned job opportunities. You can state this reason in the paragraph leader. Then, you will elaborate on this idea by providing supporting sentences. @SaadiaRamzanRamzan
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to Martha Salamanca
Thank you. Do you live outside of this city?
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It is great to see you understand the aim of the paragraph leader. Your first sentence is clear and provides the main statement of the paragraph. Then, in your paragraph, you elaborate on your idea and provide examples. Well done! @MarthaSalamanca
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to Martha Salamanca
Thank you for your ideas! What a lovely place)
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to Christiana Oppong
I am so glad to know that! Well done. You did a great job.
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Thank you for the explanation. Yes, this topic requires some research. I am really keen to read your essay if you submit it, @ChristianaOppong.
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You are welcome! @ChristianaOppong
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Ainur Bulasheva replied to Christiana Oppong
Good! Interesting topic @ChristianaOppong
